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Sour Strawberries: Part 10

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Shirogane Ryou and Akasaka Keiichirou came back from their shopping, when they noticed that Café Mew Mew was already closed. They astonished looked at each other, and then stepped inside the pink building. ‘Mina-san!’ Keiichirou loudly said, which made the Mews aware that their two bosses had returned. Lettuce was the first one to leave the room and go look for the two older guys. ‘Anno,’ she began. The two men turned around when they heard her soft voice. ‘Lettuce!’ Ryou said, walking towards her. ‘Where the hell are you guys? And why is the Café closed? Did something happen?’ he asked, Lettuce blinked with her blue eyes and then walked away without saying anything. Keiichirou put the shopping bags on a table, and he and Ryou followed one of the waitresses from the now closed shop. They were surprised when they saw the others all standing at a bed where someone was sleeping in. Ryou saw it was Kisshu, an alien and also one of their enemies. ‘What is he doing here?’ the blond immediately asked on an angry tone to the four girls. They kept silent, and that was when Ryou also noticed that Ichigo wasn’ t with them. Before he could ask where she saw, they all began to tell the same story that Ichigo told them before. When they finished, the two guys could only look at each other and nodded with serious faces. ‘Dos ta no?’ Mint asked, when she saw the expressions. Ryou sighed, and sat down on a wooden chair next to the door. ‘We aren’ t certainly sure about the next thing I’ m going to tell you all, but yet still it is a serious case that we just need to talk about. So, are you prepared to carefully listen to what I am going to say?’ Mint, Lettuce, Pudding and Zakuro nodded and they all thought the same thing at that moment. What was he going to tell?

After the fight between him and Ichigo were the cat girl had told him clearly that he needed to stay away from her and that pacific alien, Aoyama-kun had run far away from the school where he had met the first and only love of his life. However, that was something from the past. His relationship with the red haired girl was over, but the pain in his heart would always stay. He ran in a dark lane, and fell on the ground. He hided his face in his hands, and started to cry. He knew if somebody would see him they would call him a weakling because people were used to it that boys couldn’ t cry. But Aoyama-kun didn’ t care about that. He lost the only girl who he told that he loved her, and his heart was rubbed into pieces. Maybe Ichigo had felt the same feeling, or at least in the beginning. But that thought was ridiculous because Ichgio proved him a few hours before that the only one she loved was that rebellious green haired alien who he had fight before in his Blue Knight form. Inside his body, he felt a weak presence from another creature. ‘You should stop crying,’ a voice said to him. Aoyama-kun recognized it as Deep Blue’ s voice, and he got a bit scared. ‘W- What are you doing in my body?’ he stuttered. The black haired boy heard the powerful alien laughing. ‘You thought I was destroyed by you and that persistent little Mew, didn’ t you? Well, you were wrong. I could just escape from the Mew Aqua power, and now I’ m still alive and I feel a new dark power in your body, young boy.’ one of the previous enemies from Tokyo Mew Mew said to the kendo fighter. ‘I feel your hatred for that impostor who’ s name I don’ t want to say, but I suggest you know who I’ m talking about... When that dark power is growing stronger, I can re-awake again and we can work together to kill that useless alien and those disgusting Mews.’ Aoyama-kun was shocked for a moment. ‘Kill them?’ he asked. Deep Blue nodded, but he couldn’t see that. The astonished expression on the face from the boy changed. An evil grin appeared on his face. He could finally get his revenge. Ichigo would pay for breaking up with him...

Beams of the evening sunset were shining through the sheets from the trees, while Ichigo stood at the lake he park. A sigh came out of the girl’ s mouth, and she closed her grey eyes. She opened her eyes again after a short moment of rest and then arc her head over the blue water. She saw her mirror picture in the blue lake and she began to think. What was she actually doing here, while she was supposed to be at Kisshu’ s side right now. ‘Because I’ m a coward,’ she whispered to herself. A tear rolled over her cheek and felt in the water, and a wrinkle appeared which made her mirror imagine disappear like if she was a ghost. She felt terrible. Why couldn’ t she just be her happy self like she was before Masaya broke up with her. Anger came up in her body when she thought about that name again, and she remembered how the black haired boy had made Kisshu suffer. She rubbed the tears out of her eyes, and softly smiled. It was time for her to return to the Café, apologize to everybody and then give a kiss to her new boyfriend. While she ran back in the direction from the pink building, an ice cold wind touched her cheeks and she shivered. She suddenly felt very uneasy, and looked around her, but she saw nobody else in the whole area. ‘Your imagination is freaking again, Ichigo.’ she said to herself, and with that thought she returned to her friends and lover with a satisfied feeling.
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Starring; Shirogane Ryou
Akasaka Keiichirou
Midorikawa Lettuce - Mew Lettuce
Kisshu
Momomiya Ichigo - Mew Ichigo
Aizawa Mint - Mew Mint
Fong Pudding - Mew Pudding
Fujiwara Zakuro - Mew Zakuro
Aoyama Masaya - Blue Knight/Ai no Kishi
Deep Blue

Characters; © Yoshida Reiko & Ikumi Mia
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This are the persons who are in the tenth part of my new Tokyo Mew Mew Fanfic “Sour Strawberries”. Later, this story is also going to appear in the form of a comic, but for now I’ m just going to write it because I’ve many things to do for school and I’ m not in a drawing mood lately. However... Because the series are originally in Japanese, I’ m also using Japanese words in my story. And because not everyone can understand Japanese, I think it’ s the best to put a “Translation” column in my “Artist’s Comments”. I hope that this system is going to lear you alot about Japanese words, lean you help with reading the story, and that it is going to be an effective thing. But I’ m not going to tell all the details about the system, so it’ s for you to find out how it works. But, if you still have some questions, be free to ask me what’ s on your mind, so I can help you.

Translation

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Piece 1;
Mina(-san) - Everybody
Anno - Uh
Dos ta no - What´ s wrong
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Piece 2;
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Piece 3;
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I think this isn’ t very difficult. But that’ s what I, at least, hope that it is. But like I said before; If you got a question about whatever you need to know, you just need to ask me and I’ ll explain it to you. This was it acutally for the tenth part. Pretty much, I think. And I hope you agree with me, and enjoyed reading this. I already have some ideas for the eleventh part, so I hope you will also join me then. Until then, please have enough with this part and wait with excitement on what is going to follow.

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Suuz112's avatar
....Ooooh. ^___^
I likeeee! :3
You better update soon!! =D